NG = no good. Main reason is it’s poorly written. Any topic can be fascinating if the book is well written. Most books quickly get into details and tangentials. Almost always do not post sections from all the way to the end of the sample, only The Devil and Communist China in this list. One or two sections satisfy interest and want to move on to next book.
For the sections I post always do some editing, including:
-delete the word “that” if “you know” can be substituted, almost every paragraph has at least a few
-change words when think of a better word that should have been used
-rewrite sloppily written sentences
-delete whole paragraphs such as those with too much detail and tangential off-subject information
The same with article sections I post.


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